Some advice for a shop's spot

Hi guys!
I hope you are doing OK. Since I am getting a lot of great feedbacks from you I want to share a video I prepared to know what you think.

It's about a shop that sells handmade products in Sardinia. The spot was an idea by the shop owner, so I tried to follow his good ideas and capture interesting moments.

I want to know if it is too long, if it is boring and if there are some changes to be made. It will appear on the shop's website, so it's important to show a lot of the products that the store sells (I was thinking of editing just 1 minute and 30 seconds, but I can't cut too much from this version).

What I don't like:

1. The grading is not consistent - I have to work on that
2. I wanted to show a well illuminated shop, but maybe I over exposed too much
3. I don't like the cars at the beginning

What I like:

1. The music, I think it's light but not boring
2. The transition from the shop to the textile industry
3. The ending
4. The fact that I followed my client's directions
5. The fact that the girl is pretty natural (she is not an actress)

Details:
Camera: Nex 5T
Lens: Tamron 17 - 50 2.8
Tripod: Manfrotto 055XPROB + 701HDV
Edited with Final Cut Pro X

Link:
drive.google.com/file/d/0B4-QkZ2_Y_RCanA...U0k/edit?usp=sharing

Thank you for your time