Future Abstract Video

Hey Guys,

I realize on the spur of the moment the clip for music producer from Berlin (Germany) oryginally from Hungary.

This is a new beat music from Mad-Hop Records, where I take a small part of whole project, if you really enjoy music, you can also buy it on:
www.mad-hop-records.com

There is a lot of abstract geometric "things", if some of you have 4 minutes I will be rewarding

TEASER:
vimeo.com/63078869

WHOLE CLIP:
vimeo.com/66722714

Aww... the ending, I certainly didn't see that coming. Kind of a nuclear waste romance of sorts. Well, it's very Avant-garde, which is often divisive, people will love or hate it. I'm kinda in the middle or a little to the love side. Lots of interesting filmic techniques you've added here. The reflective scenes are interesting, I like the large round circle of what looks like a horizon. The kaleidoscope section is also compelling. When going for something this experimental you run the risk of people tuning out. Also if the music really has no melody, harmony or hook, it becomes more like repetitive machine sounds. When that is matched with repetitive themes & clips, the attention span of the viewer is tested.

Therefore the teaser with less filler is more effective. The full length piece could be trimmed by close to 30% resulting in a more impact-full film. Yes she has a beautiful arabesque, but seeing it twice actually lessens it by half. When we see her in a long shot over all the strewn debris, she loses a lot of power. Your closer shots with the inherent strangeness are more captivating, less revealing, don't throw that away with total disclosure. Also when we first see her face in close up, I'd rather a filter or effect on that shot so the caked on clown makeup is not so evident, make that shot a bit more mysterious. With this in mind, there is a fast cutting sequence as we move into act 3, where we see short snippets of some exciting dance moves & other interesting happenings, you're strongest here, & it matches the music better. The kaleidoscope section could be trimmed by about 20%. The lead-in to that with the mushrooms? is very effective. I also wouldn't mind a bit more blurring, or slight obscuring effect on your closeups of the blue smoke. More mystery will almost always draw people in. Overall a very ambitious piece, no one can accuse you of having a lack of boldness. Great ending.

Thanks for sharing.







J. Matthew
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